4 Qs

1. What one specific aspect of your paper are you proudest of? Why?
I am most pround of my detailed analysis of the ad. I am proud of how i used my descritiveness learned from the previous essay and was able to use it to analyze the ad in its fullness.
2. What was the most difficult aspect of writing this essay? Why?
The most difficult aspect of writing the Ad Analysis essay was finding what cold have worked better for the Ad. The ad directly targeted my age group so it was difficult for me to find how it could be improved since it worked very well.
3. Imagine that you have a few extra hours to revise this paper. What aspect(s) of the paper would you reword, write, and/or polish? Why?
If I were given a few extra hours I would most likely analyze the few words that were used in the essay even further. I think that I may have been able to go into greater depth with what the phrase meant and how it applied.
4. How would you approach such a revision?
I would revise the paper by asking a friend to read and correct my paper. I would take the critisism, just as I did with the revisions provided by my classmates, and use it to better my paper.