Thursday, September 23, 2010

4 Qs

1. What one specific aspect of your paper are you proudest of? Why?
I am most proud of the detail within my paper. The detail perfectly describes the events of the story and builds the imagery for the reader.

2. What was the most difficult aspect of writing this essay? Why?
The most difficult aspect of writing the essay was starting the paper and writing the conclusion. I have difficulty beginning most papers I write, but once I begin my paper I can easily continue the body. Also, I have difficulty ending my papers strong.

3. Imagine that you have a few extra hours to revise this paper. What aspect(s) of the paper would you reword, write, and/or polish? Why?
If I were given a few extra hours I would revise my final paragraph. I would work on finishing my paper even stronger and reword sentences to better the structure of the conclusion.

4. How would you approach such a revision?
I would revise the paper by asking a friend to read and correct my paper. I would take his view of my paper and his corrections to rewrite a paper more appealing to the reader.

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